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Thursday, 15 September 2016

Mr and Mrs Twit are...

Icky, sticky, vile and cruel Mr and Mrs Twit eat awful gruel they are rude, crude and gross and what’s worse i’ll tell you they eat birds and even their brains I hope their house goes up in flames!

Now it’s time to tell you more all about this gore and lore (also known as disgustingly grossness) Mr Twit is vile and cruel he doesn’t even take a shower his smell can travel an 80 k an hour! He has awful food in his beard  his face is enough to make children scared!


I hope you like my document/Rhyme because I worked so hard on it

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kaitlynne,
    This blog post is so amazing. I like the effort and adjectives you put in your writing. Maybe you could include a photo of the twits or explain who they are for those who don't know. This writing was enjoyable to read and your effort really shown through

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  2. Hi Ruby,
    thankyou for the comment and the tips I hope to vist your blog sometime
    thankyou.

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